Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details about the bike or where you rode it. Use “after school” rather than “after my school,” “for two to three hours a day” rather than “at day,” and avoid repeating that you enjoyed riding. “Gave me” sounds more natural than “gifted me” in this context.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me one as a present, and I was thrilled. I used to ride it for a couple of hours after school, usually around my neighbourhood.

提案: Your first sentence answers the question clearly, but the supporting sentence has a subject–verb agreement error and awkward word order. Say “Most people in rural areas ride bikes.” To develop your answer, add a specific reason, such as bikes being affordable or useful for short journeys.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people ride them because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. They are also useful on narrow roads where cars can be difficult to manage.

× I remember riding on it after my school for like two to three hours at day I enjoyed riding on a bike.

✓ I remember riding on it after school for like two to three hours a day. I enjoyed riding on a bike.

In this context, use after school without my. The phrase after school refers generally to the time when school has ended, so an article or possessive determiner is not needed.

× I remember riding on it after my school for like two to three hours at day I enjoyed riding on a bike.

✓ I remember riding on it after school for like two to three hours a day. I enjoyed riding on a bike.

At day is not the correct expression for describing how often something happens. Use a day in the phrase two to three hours a day. A useful pattern is an amount of time + a day, such as one hour a day.

× I remember riding on it after my school for like two to three hours at day I enjoyed riding on a bike.

✓ I remember riding on it after school for like two to three hours a day. I enjoyed riding on a bike.

The original sentence joins two complete thoughts without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction. Separate them with a period, or join them with a conjunction such as and. Check that each complete thought is clearly separated.

× Most of the people in rural areas, rides, bikes.

✓ Most of the people in rural areas ride bikes.

The subject people is plural, so the verb should be the base form ride, not rides. Do not place commas between the subject, verb, and object.