Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 質問にまず「子どもの頃、自転車を持っていた」と明確に答えましょう。「a bicycle for child」ではなく「a children's bike」や「a small bike」、「hoil」は「training wheels（補助輪）」が適切です。言い直しやフィラーを減らし、補助輪がどのように役立ったかを短く付け加えると、自然で分かりやすい回答になります。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike with training wheels, which helped me keep my balance when I was learning to ride. Eventually, I learned to ride without them.

提案: 「はい、とても人気があります」と質問に直接答えたうえで、理由を一つか二つ説明しましょう。「most of students」は「most students」、「ride bicycle」は「ride bicycles」が自然です。また、「日本には田舎が多い」という点は、自転車が便利な理由につなげて説明し、文を最後まで言い切りましょう。

例: Yes, definitely. Many students in Japan ride bicycles to school, especially in smaller towns and rural areas. Bicycles are convenient there, particularly when public transport is less frequent.

× I had a ... bicycle for child.

✓ I had a ... bicycle for a child.

The singular countable noun child needs an article in this phrase. Use a before child when referring to one child.

× So the child ... it's not like unconventional type of bike.

✓ So, it's not like an unconventional type of bike.

The singular countable noun phrase unconventional type of bike needs an article. Use an because unconventional begins with a vowel sound. The phrase the child is omitted because its meaning is unclear here.

× In Japan like students, most of students have to ride bicycle for for going to school.

✓ In Japan, most of the students have to ride bicycles to go to school.

When most is followed by of and a plural noun referring to a specific group, use the before the noun: most of the students. The repeated for is a disfluency, and to go is a clearer way to express the purpose.

× In Japan like students, most of students have to ride bicycle for for going to school.

✓ In Japan, most of the students have to ride bicycles to go to school.

When speaking generally about what students ride, use the plural bicycles. Alternatively, you could say ride a bicycle.

× And also in Japan has a lot of countryside.

✓ Also, Japan has a lot of countryside.

The original sentence begins with a location phrase, but it has no grammatical subject for has. Use Japan as the subject. Also, avoid combining and with also at the beginning of this sentence.