Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容过于简短。可以补充一两句具体细节，例如自行车的样子、骑车的地点或你通常骑车做什么，让回答更完整自然。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: 回答回应了问题，也提供了理由，但语法和表达有明显问题。“many classmates they ride”中不应重复主语，可改为“many of my classmates ride”；“bikes”重复了一次。建议先直接回答，再用自然、具体的理由支持观点。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many of my classmates ride them to school or use them to get around nearby areas. They are convenient and also help people stay active.

× Yes, I do because I have many classmates they ride bikes bikes too.

✓ Yes, I do because I have many classmates who ride bikes too.

“I have many classmates they ride...”把两个句子直接连接在一起，句子结构不正确。这里应使用关系代词“who”引导定语从句，说明这些同学会骑自行车。另外，“bikes”重复了一次，应删除。可以记住：用“名词 + who + 动词”来描述人。