Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

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会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

I have a bike when I was a child.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

is bikes are popular with the China because it is common and covenant of everyone's life.

評価

総合

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 55.0

提案: 回答切题,但描述过去经历时需要使用过去式:把“I have”改为“I had”。目前答案较短,可以补充一个具体细节,例如你通常在哪里骑车或用它做什么。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 35.0

提案: 先直接回答“Yes, they are”,注意主谓一致;表达“中国”应说“in China”,不能说“with the China”。“covenant”不是这里需要的词,应使用“convenient”。建议说明自行车为何受欢迎,并补充一个具体例子。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China because they’re a convenient and affordable way to get around. You can see people riding them to work or school, especially in busy cities.

文法

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此主句也要使用过去时。动词“have”的过去式是“had”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× is bikes are popular with the China because it is common and covenant of everyone's life.

✓ Bikes are popular in China because they are common and convenient for everyone.

句首的“is”多余,造成句子结构错误;直接用“Bikes are popular”即可。回答时可以在句首加“Yes”,但不能在主语前再加一个“is”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× is bikes are popular with the China because it is common and covenant of everyone's life.

✓ Bikes are popular in China because they are common and convenient for everyone.

表示“在中国”时应使用“in China”,而不是“with China”。表达“对每个人来说方便”时可用“convenient for everyone”。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article(定冠词使用错误)

× is bikes are popular with the China because it is common and covenant of everyone's life.

✓ Bikes are popular in China because they are common and convenient for everyone.

国家名称“China”前通常不加定冠词“the”,因此应说“in China”,而不是“in the China”或“with the China”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× is bikes are popular with the China because it is common and covenant of everyone's life.

✓ Bikes are popular in China because they are common and convenient for everyone.

此处“it”指代复数名词“bikes”,所以应使用复数代词“they”,并搭配“are”,不能说“it is”。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× is bikes are popular with the China because it is common and covenant of everyone's life.

✓ Bikes are popular in China because they are common and convenient for everyone.

此处需要用形容词“convenient”(方便的)来描述自行车。“covenant”是名词,意思与“方便”无关,不适合放在这里。

重要語彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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