Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也说明了想骑车的原因，但时态需要统一：谈童年经历时用过去时，如 had、rode、wanted。避免重复使用 “umm” 和 “my friends, they”；“learn balance”表达不自然，可以说 “learn how to balance”。建议先直接回答，再用一两个具体细节补充。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Most of my friends rode their bikes to the park, so I wanted to join them. Riding with them also helped me learn how to balance.

提案: 观点明确，并提供了共享单车和健康方面的理由。注意主谓一致：“Every city has”；情态动词 can 后接动词原形，如 “can save”。“cars are very crowded”不够准确，可改为 “roads are congested”；“it also can exercise our body”可改为 “cycling is also a good way to exercise”。补充具体使用场景会让回答更有说服力。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in large cities. People often use them for short trips because they can save time when the roads are congested. Cycling is also a convenient way to get some exercise.

× Yes, when I was young I have a bike because umm, my friends, they all have a umm bike and they ride it to play and I also want to play with them and learn balance.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I had a bike because all my friends had a bike and rode it to play, and I also wanted to play with them and learn to balance.

这句话描述的是小时候发生的事情，应使用过去时。have 应改为 had，ride 应改为 rode，want 应改为 wanted，以保持时态一致。另外，learn to balance 表达“学习保持平衡”更符合英语习惯。

× Every city have shared bikes.

✓ Every city has shared bikes.

Every city 中的 every 使主语视为单数，因此一般现在时的动词要用第三人称单数形式：have 应改为 has。

× It can saves our time because the cars are very crowded and it also can exercise our body and keep healthy.

✓ They can save us time because the roads are very crowded, and they can also help us exercise our bodies and stay healthy.

情态动词 can 后面必须接动词原形，所以 saves 应改为 save。

× It can saves our time because the cars are very crowded and it also can exercise our body and keep healthy.

✓ They can save us time because the roads are very crowded, and they can also help us exercise our bodies and stay healthy.

这里的代词指前面提到的共享单车，bikes 是复数，因此应用 they，而不是 it。表达“让我们保持健康”时，也应补出宾语 us，例如 help us stay healthy。

× It can saves our time because the cars are very crowded and it also can exercise our body and keep healthy.

✓ They can save us time because the roads are very crowded, and they can also help us exercise our bodies and stay healthy.

our 指代多人时，表示每个人的身体通常用复数 bodies，而不是单数 body。