Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答，再补充一个具体回忆。注意使用过去时：用“when I was learning”而不是“when I'm learning”；“where”不适合表达“当……时”，可用“when”；“fought for few times”表达不清，如果想说学骑车时摔倒，可以说“fell off a few times”。结尾的“So yes”重复了开头，可删除。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was quite young, and I remember falling off a few times while I was learning to ride it. Still, I really enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood.

提案: 回答方向明确，但可以更自然、准确地表达观点。这里谈的是自行车这种出行方式，建议说“cycling”或“bikes are popular”，而不是“it”；“I can't see few people”有误，应改为“I don't see many people”。补充具体原因或对比，并使用“although”或“while”连接。

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular for commuting in my country these days. I don’t see many adults cycling to work, probably because public transport is more convenient. However, bikes are still fairly common among students who live close to their schools.

× where I'm first learning how to write bicycle, I have one

✓ when I was first learning how to write bicycle, I had one

这里描述的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时。将“I'm first learning”改为“was first learning”，将“have”改为“had”。“where”用于表示地点；这里引出时间，应使用“when”。

× where I'm first learning how to write bicycle

✓ when I was first learning how to write bicycle

这里表达的是“当我开始学习……时”，应使用表示时间的连接词“when”，而不是表示地点的“where”。

× I still remember I fought for few times when I'm learning that.

✓ I still remember that I fell a few times when I was learning to ride it.

句子描述过去学习骑车的经历，因此应将“I'm learning”改为“was learning”。“fought”通常表示“打架”，这里按语境应为“fell”（摔倒）；这是词汇选择问题，不属于所列语法类型，因此不单独标注。

× I fought for few times

✓ I fell a few times

表示“几次”时应使用“a few times”，不能说“few times”来表达这个意思；“a few”表示有一些、几次。

× some students are riding bike to school.

✓ some students are riding bikes to school.

这里泛指学生骑自行车上学，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。