Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Trả lời trực tiếp và có thêm trải nghiệm cá nhân phù hợp, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi về thì, cấu trúc câu và cách dùng từ khiến ý khó hiểu. Hãy dùng quá khứ đơn khi nói về tuổi thơ (ví dụ: “I had”, “I rode”), sửa “my favorite activities” thành “one of my favorite activities”, và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn ý “cảm giác tự do” cũng như “ở ngoài trời”. Nên chia ý thành 2–3 câu rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends, and it was one of my favorite activities. It made me feel free and gave me a chance to spend more time outdoors.

提案: Câu trả lời có quan điểm trực tiếp và một số lý do cụ thể, nhưng “Gas bicycle” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh; có thể bạn muốn nói “bicycles”. Sửa “drive” thành “ride”, dùng số nhiều hoặc thêm mạo từ phù hợp, và hoàn thành ý cuối về việc người dân thành phố thường dùng phương tiện gì. Có thể dùng từ nối như “however” để làm rõ sự khác biệt giữa nông thôn và thành thị.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people in rural areas. They are affordable and environmentally friendly, and they are convenient for short trips. However, in big cities, many people prefer motorbikes because they are faster.

× Yes, definitely I have a bicycle when I will try it and I used to ride is about my neighborhood with my friends.

✓ Yes, definitely, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

The question asks about the past, so use past-tense forms such as had and was, not have or will try. Use used to for a past habit.

× Yes, definitely I have a bicycle when I will try it and I used to ride is about my neighborhood with my friends.

✓ Yes, definitely, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Use the object pronoun it to refer to the bicycle. Is is a verb, so it cannot take the place of the object of ride.

× It is my favorite activities in my childhood because it's a a sense of freedom and it's allow me to spend more time in outdoor looking back.

✓ It was one of my favorite activities in childhood because it gave me a sense of freedom and allowed me to spend more time outdoors.

Activities is plural, so one of my favorite activities is the correct pattern. The correction also uses the plural noun activities with the appropriate quantifier one of.

× It is my favorite activities in my childhood because it's a a sense of freedom and it's allow me to spend more time in outdoor looking back.

✓ It was one of my favorite activities in childhood because it gave me a sense of freedom and allowed me to spend more time outdoors.

The sentence describes childhood, a past period, so use past-tense verbs: was, gave, and allowed. Avoid present-tense forms such as is and allow.

× It is my favorite activities in my childhood because it's a a sense of freedom and it's allow me to spend more time in outdoor looking back.

✓ It was one of my favorite activities in childhood because it gave me a sense of freedom and allowed me to spend more time outdoors.

Use only one a before the singular countable noun sense: a sense of freedom. The repeated article a a is incorrect.

× It is my favorite activities in my childhood because it's a a sense of freedom and it's allow me to spend more time in outdoor looking back.

✓ It was one of my favorite activities in childhood because it gave me a sense of freedom and allowed me to spend more time outdoors.

Outdoors is used without the preposition in when it means outside. Say spend time outdoors, not spend time in outdoor.

× Gas bicycle is quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people in rural areas.

✓ Bicycles are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people in rural areas.

When referring to bicycles in general, use the plural form bicycles rather than the singular bicycle.

× Gas bicycle is quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people in rural areas.

✓ Bicycles are quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people in rural areas.

The plural subject bicycles requires the plural verb are. Singular subjects take is, while plural subjects take are.

× It is convenient to to drive short distance, but in the city, many people use.

✓ It is convenient to ride for short distances, but in the city, many people use them.

The infinitive marker to should appear only once before the verb. Also, use needs an object in this sentence; them refers to bicycles and completes the meaning.

× It is convenient to to drive short distance, but in the city, many people use.

✓ It is convenient to ride for short distances, but in the city, many people use them.

Short distances refers to distances in general, so use the plural noun distances rather than the singular distance.