Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ дан по теме, но фраза «Actually, when I was a child» избыточна. Лучше сказать, что велосипед был вашей мечтой, а затем пояснить, почему он вам запомнился. Используйте прошедшее время: вместо «I really like it» — «I really liked it» или «I loved it».

例: Yes, I had a yellow bike when I was a child. It was my dream bike, so I was really excited when I got it.

提案: Начните с прямого ответа: «Yes, I think they are». Связка «By the way» здесь неуместна. Согласуйте местоимение с bikes («they/them»), уберите артикль перед «school» и исправьте неестественную конструкцию «it's all it's». Добавьте конкретное объяснение популярности велосипедов.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them in parks or cycle to school. They’re also a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× It was yellow and it was my dream, so I really like it.

✓ It was yellow and it was my dream, so I really liked it.

The sentence describes a childhood bike and uses past-tense verbs, so like should also be in the past tense: liked.

× For example, a lot of children use it for riding in the park or to the school.

✓ For example, a lot of children use bikes to ride in the park or go to school.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the singular pronoun it does not agree in number with that reference. Use bikes or the plural pronoun them. The correction also uses parallel verb forms: ride in the park or go to school.

× Also, it's all it's very convenient and useful.

✓ Also, they are very convenient and useful.

The phrase it's all it's repeats and disrupts the sentence structure. Use one subject and verb instead. They refers to bikes, which is plural.