Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ตอบคำถามตรงประเด็นและให้เหตุผลที่เกี่ยวข้องแล้ว แต่ควรแก้ไวยากรณ์เป็น “when I was a child” และใช้ “having a bicycle” นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดหรือกล่าวซ้ำ และเชื่อมเหตุผลให้เป็นธรรมชาติด้วย “because” หรือ “since”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a rural area, where many people used bicycles to get around.

提案: แสดงความคิดเห็นและให้เหตุผลได้ แต่ควรแก้ “I think by not popular” เป็น “I don’t think bikes are popular” และใช้ “facilities for bicycles” หรือ “cycling infrastructure” ให้ถูกต้อง ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการย้ำ “I think” และเชื่อมประโยคให้กระชับ เช่น อธิบายว่าไม่มีเลนจักรยาน จึงนิยมใช้รถจักรยานยนต์แทน

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There aren’t many dedicated bike lanes, so cycling can be inconvenient or unsafe. As a result, many people prefer to use motorcycles.

× I did have a bike when I was child because I grew up in a rural area so ha having bicycle is very common in my area.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child because I grew up in a rural area, so having a bicycle is very common in my area.

Use the indefinite article a before child because child is a singular countable noun. Use a before bicycle for the same reason. The repeated fragment ha is a speech hesitation and is omitted from the corrected sentence.

× I think by not popular in my country

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country

The original clause is missing a subject and a finite verb, and by does not function correctly in this sentence. Use bikes as the subject and are as the verb to form a complete clause.

× we don't have facilities for bicycle

✓ we don't have facilities for bicycles

Bicycle is used to refer to bicycles in general, so the plural form bicycles is appropriate here. Alternatively, you could say facilities for cycling.

× such as we don't have a bike lane

✓ for example, we don't have bike lanes

Such as is normally followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a complete clause. Use for example to introduce the clause we don't have bike lanes.