Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer directly addresses the question and is grammatically correct. To make it more engaging, add one specific detail, such as how often you rode it, where you rode it, or what you enjoyed about it. Keep the response concise and natural.

例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I loved the sense of freedom it gave me.

提案: You give relevant reasons, but the sentence is awkward and contains a pronoun agreement error: use “their benefits” rather than “its benefit.” Also, “economically saving for the gas” is unnatural; say “they save money on fuel.” Answer the question clearly, then support your opinion with one or two concise reasons.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are good for people’s health and help commuters save money on fuel. They are also convenient for short trips when traffic is heavy.

× Bikes are commonly used as a mode of transportation for many people due to its benefit for the heart and also economically saving for the gas.

✓ Bikes are commonly used as a mode of transportation by many people because of their benefits for heart health and because they save money on gas.

The plural noun Bikes should be referred to with the plural pronoun their, not the singular pronoun its. Keep the pronoun consistent with its plural antecedent.

× Bikes are commonly used as a mode of transportation for many people due to its benefit for the heart and also economically saving for the gas.

✓ Bikes are commonly used as a mode of transportation by many people because of their benefits for heart health and because they save money on gas.

Economically saving is not a natural or grammatically suitable expression in this sentence. Use a clear verb phrase such as save money, or describe bikes as economical.

× Bikes are commonly used as a mode of transportation for many people due to its benefit for the heart and also economically saving for the gas.

✓ Bikes are commonly used as a mode of transportation by many people because of their benefits for heart health and because they save money on gas.

The usual expression is save money on gas, not saving for the gas. Use on to identify the expense that is reduced.