Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense: say “I didn’t have a bike.” Use “when I was a child,” not “when I were child,” and explain briefly why you didn’t have one. The phrase “In writing bicycle” is unclear, so leave it out or clarify what you mean. Aim for one or two complete, natural sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned to ride one, so I usually walked or took the bus.

提案: Give a clear opinion first, such as “Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country.” Use “ride a bike” or “travel by bike”—not “use by bicycle”—and avoid repeating “bicycle.” Add a specific supporting detail, such as who rides bikes or where they ride. Replace fillers like “umm” with a brief pause.

例: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country. Many people ride bikes to work or school, especially in cities with dedicated cycle lanes. It’s an affordable and convenient way to get around.

× No, I don't have a bike when I were child, I never practice.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, and I never practiced.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use didn't have instead of don't have and practiced instead of practice. The past form of be with I is was, not were. Add and to join the two independent clauses correctly.

× No, I don't have a bike when I were child, I never practice.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, and I never practiced.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child: a child. In English, singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

× I think he's riding bicycle is popular in my country.

✓ I think riding a bicycle is popular in my country.

The phrase he's riding creates an incomplete and confusing clause before is popular. Use the gerund phrase riding a bicycle as the subject of is popular. This structure clearly expresses that cycling is popular.

× I think he's riding bicycle is popular in my country.

✓ I think riding a bicycle is popular in my country.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bicycle when referring to one bicycle in a general sense.

× Many people use by bicycle then umm they enjoy riding bicycle.

✓ Many people use bicycles, and they enjoy riding bicycles.

Use bicycles directly after use; by does not belong between use and its object. If you want to use by, say Many people travel by bicycle instead.

× Many people use by bicycle then umm they enjoy riding bicycle.

✓ Many people use bicycles, and they enjoy riding bicycles.

Use the plural form bicycles when speaking generally about bicycles people use or ride. A singular countable noun would need an article, such as a bicycle.

× Many people use by bicycle then umm they enjoy riding bicycle.

✓ Many people use bicycles, and they enjoy riding bicycles.

And is the appropriate conjunction to connect two related facts. Then usually indicates the next event in a sequence, which is not the intended meaning here.