Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I did have a bag when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was in kindergarten and it was a pink bag with beautiful shining decoration. And I think it do me a favor because it really helped me to learn how to control my
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Of course, bicycles are popular in May country because lots of neighborhoods are far from the subway station, so many people choose to ride a bike to get to the subway so they can get to the workplace or their school more efficiently. And Bethlehu are very environmental friendly.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 20.0提案: 回答时要先紧扣问题中的 bike，避免把 bike 误说成 bag。你的回答在句子中途结束，内容不完整；注意补全“学会控制什么”。另外，使用过去时和自然表达，例如把 “it do me a favor” 改成 “it helped me”。可补充自行车的颜色、购买时间或骑车经历，但控制在 2—3 句。
例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small pink bike when I was in kindergarten, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood. It also helped me learn how to balance and control the bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答观点明确，也提供了骑车接驳地铁的原因，但 “May country” 和 “Bethlehu” 表达不清，应改为 “my country” 和 “bicycles”。避免重复使用 so；可以用 “This means...” 衔接结果。最后应说 “environmentally friendly”，并尽量具体说明骑车的便利或环保优势。
例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. In many areas, people ride them to the nearest subway station because it’s a convenient way to continue their commute to work or school. They’re also environmentally friendly and help reduce traffic.
文法
× And I think it do me a favor because it really helped me to learn how to control my
✓ And I think it did me a favor because it really helped me to learn how to control my
这里描述的是童年时自行车对你的帮助，语境是过去时，因此应将 do 改为过去式 did。注意结合句子的时间背景选择动词时态。
× And Bethlehu are very environmental friendly.
✓ And Bethlehu are very environmentally friendly.
friendly 是形容词，修饰形容词 friendly 时需要用副词 environmentally，而不是形容词 environmental。固定表达是 environmentally friendly，意为“环保的”。
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