Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题，并且把过去时问句中的“did”改成了“do”。回答童年经历时，先直接说“是”或“不是”，再补充一两个具体细节；注意使用过去时，例如“Did you have...?”对应的回答可以用“I had...”或“I didn’t have...”。

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你明确表达了自行车在国内很受欢迎，也提到了通勤、购物和上学等用途，内容切题。但“Umm”和“And uh”较多，部分句子缺少主语或谓语；“I'll try all shopping”表达不清楚，也不需要以“Thank you”结束回答。建议先直接回答，再用连接词补充具体用途，并用完整句子说明。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive. They are also useful for short trips, such as going to nearby shops.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

句子中的“when you were a child”表示过去的时间，因此询问过去是否拥有自行车时，应使用一般过去时。将助动词“Do”改为过去式“Did”，并将其后的动词保持原形“have”。

× Umm, go to work.

✓ Many people use bikes to go to work.

原句只有动词短语“go to work”，缺少明确的主语和完整的谓语结构，因此不是完整句。可补上主语“Many people”和谓语“use bikes”，并用“to go to work”说明骑车的目的。