Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有回应是否小时候有自行车，且“ I had a bag”与问题无关。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一两句具体信息，例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或学骑车的经历。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: 你表达了自行车受欢迎的观点，也尝试说明通勤原因，但句子不完整，且“Most people by bike”缺少谓语；“when working time”也不自然。可以说“Bikes are popular, especially among people who commute to work”，然后补充具体原因或例子，并减少填充词。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who commute to work. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly in busy cities.

× Yes, it's popular.

✓ Yes, they're popular.

这里的“it”指代复数名词“bikes”，代词应使用复数形式“they”，因此相应地将“it's”改为“they're”。

× especially when working time

✓ especially during working hours

表示“在工作时间期间”时，应使用介词“during”，而不是“when”。此外，“working hours”是表达“工作时间”的自然说法。

× Most people by bike for work.

✓ Most people go to work by bike.

原句缺少谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。可以添加“go”，组成“go to work by bike”，表示“骑自行车去上班”。