Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsınız ve bisikletin rengini eklemeniz iyi. Ancak “When I was a child” ifadesi tek başına cümle oluşturmadığı için önceki veya sonraki cümleyle birleştirilmeli. “I had a bike” tekrarını önleyerek cevabı daha doğal ve akıcı hâle getirin; bisikleti ne için kullandığınız gibi kısa, belirgin bir ayrıntı da ekleyebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Fikrinizi belirtmeniz ve neden sunmaya çalışmanız olumlu; ancak dilbilgisi hataları cevabı anlamayı zorlaştırıyor. “When I walking” yerine “when I walk”, “I seen” yerine “I see” ve “very child” yerine “many children” kullanın. Gözleminizi daha doğal ifade edin ve cevabı tek bir neden ile kısa, somut bir örnekle destekleyin.

例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I often see children riding them in the streets. They are especially common in parks and quiet neighborhoods.

× When I was a child.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

This is an incomplete sentence because the when-clause does not express a complete thought on its own. Join it to the main clause with a comma.

× when I walking in the street

✓ when I walk in the street

The sentence describes a general or repeated situation, so use the present simple form walk. The phrase I walking is missing an auxiliary verb if you intend to use the present progressive.

× I seen

✓ I see

The answer describes what the student generally observes, so use the present simple see. Seen is a past participle and normally needs an auxiliary verb, such as have.

× very child

✓ many children

Very does not quantify a noun. Use many with a plural countable noun to mean a large number of children.

× very child they are using bike

✓ many children are using bikes

The plural noun children is needed because the sentence refers to multiple children. Bikes should also be plural because multiple children use them.