Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答“没有”，再说明原因。注意语法：表达“不会骑自行车”可说“ I couldn’t ride a bike”，而不是“I'm not good at to ride a bike”。最后一句表达不清楚；如果你是想说父母担心你骑车过马路，可以具体说明。使用 because 连接原因，并避免重复或含糊的表达。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I never learned how to ride one. I was quite nervous about riding near traffic, so my parents didn’t encourage me to try.

提案: 回答与问题相关，但应先明确说明自行车是否受欢迎，再用一两个具体理由解释。当前表达中“for the for this workers”和“choose take”不自然；可以说“convenient for commuters”和“choose to take the subway”。也可以补充自行车仍在哪些场景受欢迎，例如短途出行或健身。

例: Not as much as cars or the subway, especially in big cities. Many people prefer driving or taking the subway because these options are convenient for commuting. However, bikes are still popular for short trips and exercise.

× MMM, no I'm not actually.

✓ No, I didn't, actually.

问题问的是“小时候有没有自行车”，时间背景是过去，因此回答应使用过去时。这里用“didn't”表示“没有”，而不是现在时“I'm not”。

× I'm not good at to ride a bike because it's so difficult.

✓ I'm not good at riding a bike because it's so difficult.

介词“at”后面应接名词或动名词（动词-ing形式），不能接“to ride”。因此应说“good at riding a bike”。

× Uh, for me, I always the four dyeing the road so my parents don't.

✓ I was always afraid of dying on the road, so my parents didn't let me ride a bike.

原句缺少完整的谓语结构，且“the four dyeing”无法构成通顺的表达。可以用“be afraid of + 动名词”表达“害怕……”，并补全“so”后面的结果从句。根据前文的童年背景，使用“was”和“didn't”也更合适。

× I think nowadays more people choose and drive a car because it's so convenient for the for this workers or they choose take a subway because they need to.

✓ I think that nowadays more people choose to drive cars because it's convenient for workers, or they choose to take the subway because they need to.

“choose”后面接表示选择做某事的动词时，应使用“choose to do”，所以应说“choose to drive”和“choose to take”。原句中的“for the for this workers”结构不完整且重复；泛指工作人员时可直接说“for workers”。

× I think nowadays more people choose and drive a car because it's so convenient for the for this workers or they choose take a subway because they need to.

✓ I think that nowadays more people choose to drive cars because it's convenient for workers, or they choose to take the subway because they need to.

这里说的是越来越多的人选择开车，表达一般情况时用复数“cars”更合适。