Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 과거의 경험을 묻는 질문이므로 현재형인 “have”와 “am” 대신 과거형 “had”와 “was”를 사용하세요. 자전거를 타는 것은 “write”가 아니라 “ride”라고 합니다. 먼저 질문에 직접 답한 뒤, 자전거를 얼마나 자주 탔는지 또는 왜 잘 타지 못했는지 구체적인 정보를 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was young, but I wasn’t very good at riding it. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: “Bikes”는 복수 명사이므로 “it is” 대신 “they are”를 사용하세요. 자연스러운 표현은 “Bikes aren’t very popular in my country”입니다. 답변에 이유나 구체적인 예를 덧붙이고, “because”나 “for example” 같은 연결어를 활용하면 더 풍부하고 논리적인 답변이 됩니다.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer to drive or take public transport. For example, cycling is less common in busy city centers.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am a young, but I am not good at writing a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was young, but I wasn't good at riding a bike.

The question asks about a past childhood experience, so use the past tense: had and was. The negative past form is wasn't. Use riding, not writing, to describe using a bike.

× I think it is not much popular in my country.

✓ I don't think they are very popular in my country.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they and the plural verb are to agree with bikes.

× I think it is not much popular in my country.

✓ I don't think they are very popular in my country.

Much does not normally modify the adjective popular in this sentence. Use very to describe the degree of popularity, or say not very popular.