Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了父亲教你骑车的经历，这是不错的内容。注意使用过去时：用“had”代替“have”，用“helped”代替“will help”。“learn the bike”和“come by the bike”不自然，可以说“learn to ride a bike”和“ride it”。减少“mmm”等停顿，并把句子控制得简洁清楚。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I learned surprisingly quickly—in about an hour.

提案: 你表达了肯定观点，但后面的信息不够清楚。回答一般性问题时，用复数“bikes are”比单数“the bike was”更合适。请明确说明你所在地区（如果想举例），并把“role road”换成准确表达，例如“bike lanes”（自行车道）。可以补充骑车受欢迎的具体原因，如方便、便宜或适合短途出行。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable, and some roads have bike lanes.

× Yes, I have a bike when mmm when a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话是在回忆童年经历，应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had；“when a child”缺少主语和 be 动词，补为“when I was a child”。

× My father will help me to learn the bike and then just one hour later I come by the bike.

✓ My father helped me to learn the bike, and then, just one hour later, I came by the bike.

这句话描述过去发生的事情，因此应使用一般过去时。将 will help 改为 helped，将 come 改为 came。

× Yes, the bike was very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes were very popular in my country.

问题询问的是 bikes（复数），回答时也应使用复数 bikes，而不是单数 the bike。

× Yes, the bike was very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

问题询问自行车现在是否受欢迎，因此回答应使用一般现在时。将 was 改为 are。

× My country in Chungzhou

✓ My country is in Chungzhou.

原句缺少谓语动词。表示“我的国家在……”，需要在主语 My country 后加 be 动词 is。