Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充骑车的习惯和原因。注意时态一致：讲童年经历时用过去时，如“rode”；“because of panic”不自然，可改为“because I was nervous”；“on road”应为“on the road”。还要用连接词连接句子，避免句子过长。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I often rode it for fun around my neighbourhood, but I was too nervous to ride on the road.

提案: 回答时要明确区分普通自行车和电动自行车，否则“No”和后面的内容容易显得矛盾。删除重复的“bikes”，并避免连续使用两个“because”。“more faster”是错误表达，应改为“faster”或“much faster”。可以补充一个具体原因，例如通勤更省力。

例: Traditional bikes are less popular than they used to be. Many people now prefer electric bikes because they are faster and require less effort, especially for commuting.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school I always ride it for fun but because of panic I never rode it on road

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I always rode it for fun, but because of panic, I never rode it on the road.

这段话描述的是过去在小学时的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。原句中的“ride”应改为“rode”，与后面的“had”和“rode”保持时态一致。讲述过去发生的事情时，要注意将动词改为过去式。

× Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school I always ride it for fun but because of panic I never rode it on road

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I always rode it for fun, but because of panic, I never rode it on the road.

这里的“road”指通常所说的道路，前面需要加定冠词“the”，所以应说“on the road”。使用地点名词时，注意根据语境判断是否需要冠词。

× No, bikes bikes are less popular now because pupils are more likely to use electric models because they are more faster

✓ No, bikes are less popular now because pupils are more likely to use electric models because they are faster.

“fast”的比较级是“faster”，不能在比较级前再加“more”。因此，“more faster”应改为“faster”。构成比较级时，通常使用“more + 形容词”或“形容词 + -er”，不能重复使用两种形式。