Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and distinguish between not having a bike as a child and receiving one from your grandfather. Use natural phrasing such as “I didn’t have a bike at first” and “my grandfather gave me one.” Avoid repeating “like,” and explain briefly why the bicycle is meaningful to you.

例: I didn’t have a bike when I was very young, but my grandfather gave me one a little later. It meant a lot to me because it was a thoughtful gift from him, and I still remember how excited I was to ride it.

提案: Give a clear answer first, and use “bikes” or “motorcycles” consistently so the meaning is clear. Replace “eventually” with a suitable phrase such as “I’m also a fan of them,” and avoid repeating “every Sunday.” Explain what happens at Gallops and use the correct past or present tense.

例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country, especially among young adults. I’m a fan of them too, and I often see riders gathering at a place called Gallops near my house on Sundays. They enjoy riding together and socialising there.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

The singular count noun child needs an article. Use a before child when referring to a person without identifying a specific child.

× bike is very popular in my country

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country

The sentence makes a general statement about bikes, so use the plural noun bikes. The verb must also agree with this plural subject, so use are.

× every Sunday every rider came to there

✓ Every Sunday, every rider comes there

Every Sunday describes a regular habit, so use the present tense rather than the past tense came. Because every rider is grammatically singular, use comes.

× came to there

✓ comes there

There already indicates a destination, so do not put the preposition to before it. Say go there or come there.