Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently: say “it was,” not “it have,” and describe the colour naturally as “black.” Avoid repeating “childhood” when “when I was a child” already gives that information.

例: Yes, I had a black bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: Your answer is relevant, but “not that much” is vague and the response is too short to develop your opinion. Clarify how popular bikes are and give a specific reason or example, using a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. However, they are less common in large cities because traffic can be heavy and public transport is convenient.

× Yes I had a bike it have like black color and it was my first childhood bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was black, and it was my first bike as a child.

The answer refers to a bike the student had in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense. Replace have with was to describe the bike's color.

× Yes I had a bike it have like black color and it was my first childhood bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was black, and it was my first bike as a child.

The original joins several complete thoughts without appropriate punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas with a period and use a conjunction to connect related details.