Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答能直接表达“有”，但时态和用词错误较多。谈过去时应使用“had”和“liked”；“ride back”应改为“ride my bike”，“too tired”通常形容人的感受，可改为“tiring”或“too tiring”。删除重复的“when I was a child at that time”，并补充一个具体细节，让回答更自然。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every day after school. I enjoyed it because it was a fun way to spend time outdoors, although I don't cycle much now.

提案: 回答的核心意思不够清楚。“bags”应为“bikes”，而且“in my country it also have”结构不完整。建议先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一个具体观察或理由支持观点，并使用正确的主谓结构，例如“there are many bikes”或“cycling is popular”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see many people riding them on the streets, especially in the city center. They are convenient for short trips and help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, of course I have a bike.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候有没有自行车，语境是过去，因此应使用过去式 had，而不是现在时 have。回答过去发生的事情时，要注意让动词时态与问题中的过去时间保持一致。

× When I was a child at that time I like to ride back every day, but now I don't like because it's too tired.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to ride back every day, but now I don't like because it's too tired.

从句“When I was a child”描述过去，因此表示当时的喜好应使用过去式 liked，而不是现在时 like。讲述过去的习惯或喜好时，动词也要使用过去时。

× When I was a child at that time I like to ride back every day, but now I don't like because it's too tired.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to ride back every day, but now I don't like it because it's too tired.

这里的 like 后面需要说明“不喜欢什么”，应加代词 it 指代骑车这件事。可以使用“like/dislike + 宾语”的结构，例如“I don't like it”。

× When I was a child at that time I like to ride back every day, but now I don't like because it's too tired.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to ride back every day, but now I don't like it because it's too tiring.

tired 通常形容感到疲倦的人；描述一件事“令人疲倦”时应使用 tiring。可以记住：-ed 形式常描述人的感受，-ing 形式常描述引起这种感受的事物。

× Yes, of course there are many bags on the streets and in my country it also have.

✓ Yes, of course there are many bags on the streets, and in my country it also has many.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，一般现在时中，实义动词 have 应变为 has。主语是 he、she、it 或单数名词时，要特别检查动词是否需要加 -s 或使用不规则变化形式。