Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两句补充颜色或用途。注意使用自然表达“a children's bike”，避免重复“I”，并改正“go to too school”为“ride it to school”。“I like”后面需要补充具体对象或删去。

例: Yes, I had a small yellow bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, and I really enjoyed cycling around my neighbourhood.

提案: 回答时要明确说明现在自行车是否流行，并正确比较自行车和汽车。可用“Bikes were more popular when I was a child, but nowadays cars are more popular”表达对比；避免重复“popular”，并补充一个具体原因或例子。

例: Bikes were more popular when I was a child, but nowadays cars are more common in my country. Many people prefer driving because it is more convenient for commuting, especially over long distances.

× Yes I I had a child bicycle it was yellow I like But I often go to too school.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was yellow, and I liked it. I often rode it to school.

原句把多个意思不同的分句直接连在一起，缺少适当的标点和连接，导致句子结构不清楚。“a child bicycle”也没有清楚表达“小时候有一辆自行车”。建议把不同信息拆分成完整句子，并用“a bicycle when I was a child”表达“我小时候有一辆自行车”。

× Yes I I had a child bicycle it was yellow I like But I often go to too school.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was yellow, and I liked it. I often rode it to school.

问题谈的是小时候的经历，应该使用过去时。原句中的“I like”和“I often go”应改为“I liked”和“I often rode”。谈论过去经常发生的事情时，动词也要使用过去式。

× Yes I I had a child bicycle it was yellow I like But I often go to too school.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was yellow, and I liked it. I often rode it to school.

“I liked”后面缺少宾语代词，听者不清楚喜欢什么。这里的“it”指前文的自行车，因此应说“I liked it”。提到前文已经出现的单数事物时，可以用“it”避免重复名词。

× It was very popular when I was a child, but now it is more popular popular than bike is a car in my country.

✓ Bikes were very popular when I was a child, but now cars are more popular than bikes in my country.

这里谈论的是自行车和汽车这两类事物，应用复数“bikes”和“cars”。相应的系动词也要使用复数形式：“bikes were”和“cars are”。注意名词单复数要与谓语动词保持一致。

× It was very popular when I was a child, but now it is more popular popular than bike is a car in my country.

✓ Bikes were very popular when I was a child, but now cars are more popular than bikes in my country.

“when I was a child”描述过去，因此应使用过去时“were”；“now”描述现在，因此应使用现在时“are”。根据时间词选择相应时态，避免把过去和现在的时间关系表达混乱。

× It was very popular when I was a child, but now it is more popular popular than bike is a car in my country.

✓ Bikes were very popular when I was a child, but now cars are more popular than bikes in my country.

原句的“more popular than”后面没有清楚地接上比较对象。这里要比较汽车和自行车，所以应说“cars are more popular than bikes”。使用比较级时，确保比较双方是同类事物，并把比较对象放在“than”后面。