Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Say whether you had a bike, then add one specific detail, such as when you rode it or who taught you.

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about seven. My father taught me to ride it, and I used to cycle around our neighborhood.

提案: Your main idea is clear, but avoid repeating words such as “reliable” and “other,” and replace vague phrases like “some” and “etc.” with specific examples. Use a clear linking phrase and make the subject and verb agree—for example, “many people use bikes.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many students cycle to school, while some adults use them to commute to work, especially in busy city centers.

× Bikes are popular in my country because some often use bikes for transportation and it is a reliable reliable vehicle that can be used by the students or other or other persons, other people to go to work or ETC.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because some people often use them for transportation, and they are reliable vehicles that students or other people can use to go to work.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use the plural pronoun they and plural nouns to agree with bikes. In a polished answer, avoid repeating words and use people as the subject for clarity.