Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Of course, who didn't had who didn't have a bike. I mean, it was something necessary for all of my friend, for children in my neighborhood, because all of them had bikes that small bikes are big, whatever. So I.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
So I don't know I don't know how much I was back to here in Qatar I'm not sure they are like not very calm but at the same time there are many people use them not that much that I mean it would be because most people use cars, not bikes. For kids for kids
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 38.0提案: أجِب مباشرة بجملة واضحة، مثل: نعم، كان لديّ دراجة. ثم اذكر تفصيلاً محدداً يوضح تجربتك، كعمر حصولك عليها أو المكان الذي كنت تركبها فيه. تجنّب التكرار والتوقفات التي تقطع المعنى، واستخدم صيغة الماضي الصحيحة: “Who didn’t have a bike?” بدلاً من “Who didn’t had”. كذلك استخدم الجمع بصورة صحيحة، مثل “my friends” و“small bikes”، وأنهِ الإجابة بجملة مكتملة.
例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Most of my friends in the neighborhood had one too, so we often rode our bikes together after school. Mine was a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around the park near my home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 25.0提案: ابدأ برأي واضح، مثل: الدراجات ليست شائعة جداً في قطر. ثم اشرح السبب أو أضف مقارنة محددة؛ فمثلاً يمكنك الإشارة إلى أن الناس يعتمدون على السيارات بسبب الحرارة أو المسافات. تجنّب عبارات التردد والتكرار مثل “I don’t know” و“not that much”، وأكمل الجمل نحوياً: استخدم “many people use them” أو “there are many people who use them”. يمكنك أيضاً توضيح أن استخدامها أكثر شيوعاً بين الأطفال.
例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Qatar, especially for commuting. Most people prefer to drive because it can be very hot and distances between places are often long. However, children and some fitness enthusiasts still ride bikes in parks or along dedicated paths.
文法
× Who didn't had a bike.
✓ Who didn't have a bike.
After the auxiliary did or didn't, use the base form of the verb. Use have, not had, because didn't already marks the past tense.
× It was something necessary for all of my friend.
✓ It was something necessary for all of my friends.
All of my refers to more than one friend, so the plural form friends is needed.
× Because all of them had bikes that small bikes are big, whatever.
✓ Because all of them had bikes—small bikes, big bikes, whatever.
The clause that small bikes are big does not connect grammatically to the preceding clause. Use a list of examples instead of adding an unrelated clause with that.
× At the same time there are many people use them.
✓ At the same time, there are many people who use them.
The noun phrase many people needs a relative clause to connect it to the verb use. Add who before use.
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