Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去的情况，注意题目问的是童年，因此使用过去时（例如 *I had*），不要转而介绍现在的孩子。后面可以补充一两个具体细节，如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点或你当时的感受。检查语法：用 *with my child* 表示“和我的孩子一起”，用 *get some fresh air* 表示“呼吸新鲜空气”；避免重复 *when*，并用完整句子结束回答。

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

提案: 开头直接表达观点，例如 *Yes, I think they are quite popular*。接着说明哪些人会骑车以及骑车的常见用途，并用 *for example* 或 *because* 衔接细节。注意语法：说“很多人骑自行车”应使用 *many people ride bikes*，而不是 *many people is by bike*；避免重复回答 *yes*，并补充一个具体原因或场景。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to nearby shops or parks, especially when the weather is nice. They are also a convenient and inexpensive way to get around.

× I have a bicycle.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child.

问题问的是你小时候有没有自行车，因此应使用一般过去时。把“have”改为过去式“had”，并明确补充“when I was a child”来对应问题的时间背景。

× I usually ride my bike to the park when when them on weekends

✓ I usually ride my bike to the park with my child on weekends

“when when them”重复使用了“when”，而且“them”前后缺少必要的句子成分，导致结构不完整。根据前文提到的孩子，这里可改为“with my child”（和我的孩子一起）。注意，“with”后接名词或宾格代词。

× so we can get to some fresh air

✓ so we can get some fresh air

“get”表示“获得、呼吸到（新鲜空气）”时，直接接宾语“some fresh air”，不需要介词“to”。

× many people is by bike

✓ many people go by bike

“many people”是复数主语，不能与单数形式“is”搭配。此外，表达“骑自行车出行”时，通常说“go by bike”。

× I think yes is many people is by bike to the park and the to the shop, Yes.

✓ I think many people go by bike to the park and to the shop.

原句中“I think”后面的内容缺少正确的句子结构；“I think yes is”不能用来引出观点。可直接说“I think many people...”表达“我认为很多人……”。“the to the shop”中的“the”也多余，应改为“to the shop”。