Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense because the question is about your childhood. Avoid repeating “no,” and add a brief, relevant detail to make your response more complete.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked or got a ride from my parents.

提案: State clearly whether bikes are popular, then explain your view with a specific comparison or reason. Use correct subject–verb agreement (“there are”) and natural terms such as “scooters” and “cars.” Avoid unclear phrases like “individually” and “my car.”

例: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially for short trips. However, cars are more common in larger cities because they are more comfortable and convenient for families.

× No, no, I don't have.

✓ No, no, I didn't have one.

The question asks about the past, so use the past form did not rather than the present form do not. Add one to refer to a bike.

× Individually in my country there is many transportation is popular like bike, scooty, anything.

✓ Actually, many modes of transportation are popular in my country, such as bikes and scooters.

Use are with the plural subject many modes. The original also incorrectly uses is again after transportation; restructure the sentence so it has one clear subject and verb.

× Individually in my country there is many transportation is popular like bike, scooty, anything.

✓ Actually, many modes of transportation are popular in my country, such as bikes and scooters.

Transportation is generally uncountable, so many transportation is not correct. Use many modes of transportation. Since bikes and scooters refer to vehicles in general, use the plural forms bikes and scooters.

× Individually in my country there is many transportation is popular like bike, scooty, anything.

✓ Actually, many modes of transportation are popular in my country, such as bikes and scooters.

The original combines an incorrect there is construction with a second is popular clause, making the sentence structurally confusing. Use one subject and one verb, as in many modes of transportation are popular.

× I think in my country my car more popular.

✓ I think cars are more popular in my country.

The sentence is missing the linking verb are between cars and more popular. In the corrected version, are completes the present-tense statement.

× I think in my country my car more popular.

✓ I think cars are more popular in my country.

When speaking about cars in general, use the plural noun cars rather than the singular my car. The plural subject also agrees with are.