Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Clarify whether you owned a bike or learned to ride one, and add a brief reason or detail. Avoid the unclear phrase “try that one during when.”

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, and I never learned to ride one. My parents thought it was safer for me to walk to school.

提案: Your answer is relevant, but it is too brief and ends with a hesitation. Use the plural form “bikes are” and support your opinion with a specific reason or example, such as who uses bikes or where they ride them.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people use them to commute because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use 'didn't have' instead of 'don't have.' Adding 'one' makes clear that you mean a bike.

× I don't even try that one during when I was a child.

✓ I didn't even try it when I was a child.

This describes something in the past, so use 'didn't try' rather than 'don't try.' Keep the verb after 'didn't' in its base form: 'try.'

× I don't even try that one during when I was a child.

✓ I didn't even try it when I was a child.

'During' cannot be used directly before 'when' in this sentence. Use 'when' by itself to introduce the time clause.

× Yeah, it's really popular.

✓ Yeah, they're really popular.

The question asks about bikes, which is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'they' rather than the singular pronoun 'it.'