Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã trả lời “Yes” nhưng câu sau chưa rõ nghĩa do dùng sai từ và thì. Hãy dùng “bike” thay vì “buy”, dùng quá khứ “had” vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu, và nói “when I was a child”. Có thể bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý “có”, nhưng cấu trúc chưa hoàn chỉnh và có từ đệm “uh”. Hãy dùng câu trực tiếp “Bikes are popular in my country” rồi thêm một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, chẳng hạn mọi người dùng xe đạp để đi làm hoặc tập thể dục.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise, and some use them for short trips around town.

× Yes I have a buy when I children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense verb had rather than have. Keep the answer in the past tense to match the question.

× Yes I have a buy when I children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The clause when I children is missing a verb. Add was to form the complete clause when I was a child.

× Yes I have a buy when I children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the singular noun child after a because the speaker is referring to one person. The phrase a children is not grammatically correct.

× Yes, in my country by uh, popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence is missing a clear subject and a verb. Use bikes as the subject and are as the linking verb before the adjective popular.