Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答与问题没有清楚对应，且“a bag”可能不是想表达的“a bike”；后半句语法和意思也不明确。先直接说明小时候有没有自行车，再补充一两点具体信息，例如是谁买的、什么时候骑或为什么没有。注意使用过去时，如“had”和“couldn’t”。

例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was about seven. My parents bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 开头“I returned them back”与问题无关；之后虽然表达了“不太流行”，但举例部分难以理解，观点也缺少清楚的理由。先直接回答流行程度，再用一个明确的群体或场景作比较，并说明原因。避免重复表达，例如“returned them back”。

例: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in smaller cities. They’re affordable and convenient for short journeys, although many people in larger cities prefer public transport because of heavy traffic.

× Well, I think I have a bag when I was young.

✓ Well, I think I had a bag when I was young.

语法问题类型：一般过去时错误（ID 5）。句子中的“when I was young”表示过去，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。

× The family is reportedly they can't assist me too much.

✓ My family reportedly couldn't assist me too much.

语法问题类型：句子结构错误（ID 26）。“The family is reportedly they...”把两个结构不匹配的部分直接拼在一起。可删去“is”和“they”，让“My family”直接作主语，后接谓语。

× The family is reportedly they can't assist me too much.

✓ My family reportedly couldn't assist me too much.

语法问题类型：一般过去时错误（ID 5）。语境是在谈童年时期的情况，因此表示“不能帮忙”的“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”。

× Uh, not very popular in my country.

✓ Uh, bikes are not very popular in my country.

语法问题类型：句子缺少动词（ID 23）。原句只有形容词短语“not very popular”，缺少谓语。补上主语“bikes”和系动词“are”，句子才完整。

× So many people conclusion about how they use it.

✓ So many people draw conclusions about how they use it.

语法问题类型：句子缺少动词（ID 23）。“conclusion”是名词，不能直接充当句子的谓语。可使用“draw conclusions”（得出结论），补出谓语动词，使句子结构完整。