Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答与问题相关，但多次把“自行车”说成“包”（bag），影响理解；注意使用 bike/bicycle。用过去时描述童年经历（learned, felt），并将“feel very prone”改成准确表达，例如“felt very proud”。表达父母的爱时可说“showed my parents’ love for me”。建议先直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节，避免重复。

例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me my first bike for my seventh birthday, and I was thrilled. I learned to ride it in the park near our home, and I felt very proud when I could ride on my own.

提案: 回答没有完整结束，且“bags”“baksaring”“unlook”等词不准确或难以理解；这里应使用 bikes/bike-sharing 和 unlock。请先明确回答“自行车在中国很受欢迎”，再说明共享单车因环保、方便而流行，并补充具体使用方式。注意使用完整句子和正确搭配，例如“in recent years”“unlock a bike with an app”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes in big cities. They are an eco-friendly and convenient way to travel short distances. People can unlock one with a phone app and leave it near their destination.

× This bag represents the love about my parents for me.

✓ This bag represents the love of my parents for me.

表示“父母对我的爱”时，不能用 about。这里应使用 of，构成 the love of my parents。也可以说 the love my parents have for me。

× When I was a child, I learned to ride a bicycle and I feel very prone.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to ride a bicycle and I felt very prone.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，learned 使用了过去时，因此并列的 feel 也应使用过去时 felt。请注意，prone 的词义不合适，但这不属于给定的语法问题类型，所以这里不作修改。

× Yes the bags are popular in China because baksaring a green transportation train is emergency in China recent years.

✓ Yes the bags are popular in China because baksaring a green transportation train is emergency in China in recent years.

表示“近年来”通常使用 in recent years。原句在 China 和 recent years 之间缺少介词 in。其余部分含义不清，因此不根据猜测改写。

× You only need to use phone to unlook and

✓ You only need to use a phone to unlook and

phone 是可数名词单数，泛指一部手机时通常需要加不定冠词 a。