Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，结构清晰，也提供了具体细节。可以把“when I was little”换成更自然的“when I was young”，并补充一个结果或感受，例如学会骑车后经常和朋友一起骑车。注意避免重复使用“bike”，可以用“it”代替。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was young and taught me how to ride it. After I learned, I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 主要问题是语法和表达不够自然。第一句应改为“Bikes are very popular in my country nowadays.”；“Everybody can ride them, just pay a little”表达不准确，可以说明共享单车价格低、使用方便。建议使用“because”或“especially”连接原因，并注意逗号后不应直接大写“Everybody”。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country nowadays. You can see many bicycles on the streets, especially shared bikes. They are convenient and inexpensive, so almost anyone can rent one with a mobile phone.

× Yes, very popular in my country now.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country now.

原句缺少谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。补充系动词“are”，并加入主语“bikes”，构成完整的主谓结构。回答“Do you think bikes are popular...?”时，也可以直接说“Bikes are very popular...”来完整表达观点。

× Everybody can ride them, just pay a little.

✓ Everybody can ride them; you only need to pay a little.

原句用逗号连接两个独立分句，句子结构不正确。可以用分号连接，或者使用连词。这里用“you only need to pay a little”表达“只需要支付一点钱”，结构更完整、意思也更清楚。