Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and use a clear grammatical structure. The phrase “my grandfather one” is incorrect, and “rode that bike for me” does not clearly express your meaning. You could say that you had a bike and that your grandfather taught you how to ride it. Add one specific detail about when or where you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather gave it to me and taught me how to ride it. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Your answer is relevant and gives a reason, but it contains unnecessary fillers and grammatical errors. Say “For short-distance travel, most people use bikes” instead of “for very short distance travels, most of the people they use bikes.” Improve the response by adding a specific example, such as commuting, avoiding traffic, or saving money.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Sri Lanka, especially for short-distance travel. Many people use them to go to nearby shops or workplaces because they are affordable and convenient. They also help people avoid traffic and reduce transportation costs.

× So I had a bike and my grandfather one who rode that bike for me.

✓ So, I had a bike, and my grandfather was the one who rode it for me.

The phrase my grandfather one is missing the verb was. Adding was makes the phrase a complete clause. The pronoun it is also more natural than repeating that bike.

× So for uh like very short distance uh, travels most of the people they use bikes.

✓ For very short-distance travel, most people use bikes.

The subject most people should not be followed by the unnecessary pronoun they. Using both creates a redundant subject. Also, travel is the natural uncountable noun when referring to travel in general.