Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: “had” or “owned” instead of “have.” Answer directly and add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it. The phrase “I think” is acceptable, but it can be placed more naturally at the beginning or end of the sentence.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about ten years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: Answer the question clearly by stating whether bikes are popular or not. Complete the sentence and explain your opinion with a specific reason or example. Use a linking word such as “however,” “because,” or “especially” to make the response more coherent.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. However, many people still prefer cars because the roads can be dangerous for cyclists and the weather is sometimes unpleasant.

× Yeah, I have a bike when I was ten, I think.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was ten, I think.

The phrase when I was ten refers to a completed time in the past, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have. To improve, use the past tense when describing possessions or experiences that existed during a finished period in the past.

× I'm not really but some people are using

✓ I'm not really sure, but some people use bikes.

The phrase I'm not really is incomplete because it needs an adjective or another complement, such as sure. The sentence also needs a complete ending after are using. To improve, make sure every sentence has a complete meaning and include the necessary complement after linking verbs such as be.

× I'm not really but some people are using

✓ I'm not really sure, but some people use bikes.

The question asks about the general popularity of bikes, so the simple present use is more suitable than the present progressive are using. Use the simple present for habits, general facts, and repeated activities.