Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse ne répond pas à la question et semble contenir plusieurs erreurs de compréhension et de prononciation : « bike » est devenu « big », et « child » est devenu « shield ». Commencez par répondre directement par « Yes » ou « No », puis ajoutez un détail personnel. Évitez les répétitions comme « Did did » et entraînez-vous à distinguer les sons de « bike », « child » et « had ».

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Votre réponse ne traite pas clairement de la popularité des vélos et contient de nombreuses répétitions et hésitations. Donnez d’abord votre opinion directement, par exemple « Yes, I think bikes are quite popular », puis expliquez pourquoi avec un exemple précis. Utilisez « bikes » et « popular » correctement, et remplacez les hésitations « uh » par une courte pause.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys.

× Did did you have a big when you were a shield?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The answer should use the past tense because the question asks about childhood. Use did as the auxiliary in a short answer and had as the past form of have. The words big and shield appear to be speech-recognition errors; the intended words are likely bike and child.

× Did you, did you think big or uh, or uh poop, uh, poop a lot in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The question asks for an opinion about the present, so use the present tense think. In the answer, bikes is plural and therefore requires are. The words big and poop appear to be speech-recognition errors; the intended meaning is likely bikes are popular.