Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: say “had,” not “have,” because the question refers to your childhood. Also include the article “a” before “child.” To make the answer more effective, add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the nearby streets.

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief and repeats some words from the question. Add a clear reason and a specific example, using a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people use them to commute to work or travel around crowded city centers.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, when you were a child, so the verb have must be changed to its past-tense form, had.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is a child.