Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 시제를 정확히 사용하세요. 과거의 경험에는 ‘I had a bike’와 ‘When I was a child’를 사용해야 하며, ‘like to biking’ 대신 ‘liked riding a bike’ 또는 ‘liked to ride a bike’라고 말해야 합니다. 답변을 시작할 때 주저하거나 문장을 반복하기보다, ‘Yes, I did’로 직접 대답한 후 과거의 습관과 현재 상황을 연결하세요. 예를 들어, 자전거를 얼마나 자주 탔는지 또는 지금은 왜 탈 시간이 없는지 구체적으로 덧붙이면 더 효과적입니다.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood. However, I rarely ride a bike now because I am usually busy with work and other responsibilities.

提案: ‘bike ride a bike’처럼 같은 표현을 반복하지 말고, ‘Cycling is not very popular in my country’처럼 주어와 동사를 정확하게 구성하세요. ‘not popular activities’는 ‘not a popular activity’ 또는 ‘not very popular’로 고쳐야 합니다. ‘because’로 이유를 연결한 점은 좋지만, 스포츠 외에도 교통 환경이나 자전거 도로 부족과 같은 구체적인 이유를 하나 추가하면 답변의 내용과 어휘가 더 풍부해집니다. ‘and so on’ 대신 대표적인 예를 자연스럽게 마무리하세요.

例: No, cycling is not very popular in my country. Many people prefer sports such as soccer, baseball, and basketball because they are more common and easier to enjoy with friends. In addition, some cities do not have enough bike lanes, which makes cycling less convenient.

× Yes, I'm actually had a bike.

✓ Yes, I actually had a bike.

The question asks about a past situation, so the simple past form had is required. I'm means I am and cannot be used before the past-tense verb had in this sentence.

× When I'm a child, I like to, I like to biking.

✓ When I was a child, I liked riding a bike.

The phrase when I was a child refers to the past, so was and liked should be used instead of am and like. Keep the verb tense consistent when describing past experiences.

× When I'm a child, I like to, I like to biking.

✓ When I was a child, I liked riding a bike.

After liked, the gerund form riding is natural in this sentence. Biking cannot follow to in the original phrase. Use to ride or liked riding, but do not combine to with biking.

× No, in my country, bike ride a bike is not popular activities because there are other activities to do such as soccer, baseball and basketball and so on.

✓ No, in my country, riding a bike is not a popular activity because there are other activities to do, such as soccer, baseball, and basketball.

The subject refers to one activity, riding a bike, so activity should be singular rather than activities. Use a singular noun after the singular subject is not.

× No, in my country, bike ride a bike is not popular activities because there are other activities to do such as soccer, baseball and basketball and so on.

✓ No, in my country, riding a bike is not a popular activity because there are other activities to do, such as soccer, baseball, and basketball.

When a verb phrase functions as the subject of a sentence, use the -ing form. Therefore, riding a bike is correct, not bike ride a bike.

× No, in my country, bike ride a bike is not popular activities because there are other activities to do such as soccer, baseball and basketball and so on.

✓ No, in my country, riding a bike is not a popular activity because there are other activities to do, such as soccer, baseball, and basketball.

The singular countable noun activity needs the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is a popular activity.