Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有清楚地直接说明“小时候是否有自行车”。“If I was”用法错误，应改为“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”；“when I was children”应改为“when I was a child”。另外，“bag”应为“bike”，“I would little”应为“I was little”。建议使用“直接回答 + 原因 + 具体结果”的结构，并避免重复表达。例如可以说明自行车对当时的你来说太大，因此学习骑车很困难。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. The bikes available to me were too big because I was quite short. As a result, I found it difficult to learn how to ride one.

提案: 回答的主要观点不够清楚：你先说自行车不流行，但随后又说电动车更流行，应该明确区分普通自行车和电动自行车。句中“electric bags”应为“electric bikes”，“because”重复较多，最后的“through the frosting”意思不清。建议先直接回答，再用“because”解释原因，并补充具体场景，例如人们骑电动车上下班或购物。

例: Traditional bicycles are not as popular as electric bikes in my country. Electric bikes are more convenient, especially for commuting and shopping. For example, you can see many people riding them on busy city streets.

× If I was, I had a bike when I was children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“child”表示一个孩子，应使用单数形式。 “children”是复数形式，不能与“I was”搭配。回答过去的经历时，可以说“I had a bike when I was a child”。

× You know, that's a very big, very big bag for me because I would little and I'm short, so it's difficult to learn learn to how.

✓ You know, it was a very big bike for me because I was little and short, so it was difficult to learn how to ride it.

这里描述的是童年时的过去经历，所以应使用过去时： “was little”不能说成“would little”，“I'm short”应改为“was short”，“it's difficult”应改为“it was difficult”。

× You know, that's a very big, very big bag for me because I would little and I'm short, so it's difficult to learn learn to how.

✓ You know, it was a very big bike for me because I was little and short, so it was difficult to learn how to ride it.

“learn to how”语序错误。正确结构是“learn how to + 动词”，所以应说“learn how to ride it”。此外，“learn”重复使用会造成句子结构不完整。

× I don't think so because I think the electric bikes are more popular in our country because you because you all see many electric bags when you are when you are through the frosting.

✓ I don't think so. I think electric bikes are more popular in my country because you can see many electric bikes when you travel through the streets.

这里想表达“你能够看到很多电动车”，需要使用情态动词“can”，所以应说“you can see”。“can”后面要接动词原形“see”。

× I don't think so because I think the electric bikes are more popular in our country because you because you all see many electric bags when you are when you are through the frosting.

✓ I don't think so. I think electric bikes are more popular in my country because you can see many electric bikes when you travel through the streets.

这里是在泛指电动车，不是指某些特定的电动车，因此不需要使用定冠词“the”。应说“electric bikes”，而不是“the electric bikes”。

× I don't think so because I think the electric bikes are more popular in our country because you because you all see many electric bags when you are when you are through the frosting.

✓ I don't think so. I think electric bikes are more popular in my country because you can see many electric bikes when you travel through the streets.

原句重复使用了“because you”和“when you are”，导致句子结构混乱。可以拆成两个句子，并使用清晰的结构：“I think... because you can see...”以及“when you travel through the streets”。