Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ соответствует вопросу, но есть несколько грамматических ошибок: используйте прошедшее время “had” вместо “have”, добавьте артикли “a” и “the”, а также скажите “when I was a child”. Фраза “which bike I have” должна быть в прошедшем времени: “which bike I had”. Чтобы ответ был более содержательным, добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, где вы катались или кто подарил вам велосипед.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I don’t remember exactly what it looked like, but I remember riding it around my neighborhood. I usually rode it with my friends after school.

提案: Ответ передаёт основную идею, но он слишком короткий и содержит повтор (“older older”) и, вероятно, ошибку “snow” вместо “no”. Начните с чёткого общего ответа: “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Затем объясните различие между возрастными группами, используя связку “however” или “whereas”. Добавьте конкретную причину или пример: подростки ездят на велосипедах для развлечения, а пожилые люди используют их реже из-за состояния здоровья, погоды или отсутствия безопасных велодорожек.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among teenagers and young adults. They often ride them for fun, exercise, or to meet their friends. However, older people tend to cycle less because there are not enough safe bike lanes.

× Yes, I have bike when I was child, but I don't remember exactly which bike I have.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I don't remember exactly which bike it was.

The question refers to a time in the past, so use the past tense had instead of have. The phrase which bike I have is also inappropriate in this past-time context; which bike it was is more natural.

× Yes, I have bike when I was child, but I don't remember exactly which bike I have.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I don't remember exactly which bike it was.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bike. Use the definite article a before child in the phrase when I was a child.