Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 「I didn't like cloud that bike」は不自然で、意味が伝わりにくい表現です。「I didn't like riding that bike」または「I didn't like riding bikes」と言いましょう。また、最初に明確な答えを述べた後、乗らなかった理由を具体的に説明すると、より自然で効果的です。例えば、乗り方が難しかった、興味がなかったなどの理由を加えられます。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I rarely rode it because I found it difficult to balance. Instead, I preferred playing indoor games with my friends.

提案: 「popular」が重複しているため、1回だけ使いましょう。また、「cheap and convenient」という理由は適切ですが、どのように便利なのかを具体的に説明すると、内容がより充実します。例えば、交通渋滞を避けられることや、短い距離の移動に便利であることを加えるとよいでしょう。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many people use them to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities where they can help people avoid traffic jams.

× I had a bike but I didn't ride it because I didn't like cloud that bike.

✓ I had a bike, but I didn't ride it because I didn't like riding that bike.

The word cloud is incorrect in this context. After like, a gerund form ending in -ing can be used when referring to an activity. Therefore, riding is needed. The sentence also benefits from a comma before but, although this is a punctuation improvement rather than one of the listed grammar types.