Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently: say “I did have” or, more naturally, “I had,” instead of “I do have.” Answer the question directly and add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike or how often you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Give a clear answer using the plural form: “Yes, they are.” Avoid the vague phrase “something something” and replace “for me” with a more natural expression such as “In my opinion.” Also, support your opinion with specific reasons or examples, and use linking words such as “because” and “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. This is because they are relatively affordable and give children a sense of freedom. For example, many parents buy bikes for their children so they can ride around the neighborhood or go to school.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'when I was a child' refers to a finished period in the past, so the verb 'have' must be in the past tense: 'had.' The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary here. When describing past possession, use 'had,' not 'do have.'

× Actually, for me, yes it is because every child wants to have a bike and I think it's a sign that your family is affluent or able to afford something something.

✓ Actually, yes, I think they are, because every child wants to have a bike, and I think it is a sign that their family is affluent or able to afford one.

The question asks whether bikes are popular, so the pronoun must agree with the plural noun 'bikes': use 'they are,' not 'it is.' Also, 'their family' correctly refers to 'every child,' and 'one' replaces the repeated noun 'bike.'