Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering it, so your response does not address the topic. Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

提案: You repeated the examiner’s question rather than giving your opinion, so the answer receives no content credit. State your view directly, for example, “Yes, they are quite popular,” and support it with specific reasons, such as affordability, health benefits, environmental concerns, or traffic conditions. Keep the response to two or three connected sentences and avoid simply restating the question.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are affordable and convenient, and many people use them to avoid traffic and get some exercise. However, fewer people cycle in areas without safe bike lanes.