Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Add one or two specific details, such as when you got the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it. Avoid meaningless or unintelligible words, and use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I enjoyed cycling because it was fun and helped me spend time outdoors.

提案: State your opinion clearly at the beginning and support it with a relevant reason or example. Use accurate vocabulary related to cycling, such as “popular,” “commute,” “exercise,” or “traffic.” Avoid repeating unclear words and make sure your response directly answers whether bikes are popular in your country.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. However, cycling is less common in crowded cities because of heavy traffic.

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✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original response is not a complete sentence because it does not contain a meaningful subject or verb. Use a complete sentence with a subject and a past-tense verb to answer the question: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

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✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The original response is not a complete sentence because it does not contain a clear subject and verb. To answer this question, use the subject bikes and the present-tense verb are: Bikes are very popular in my country.