Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly instead of giving a greeting. Start with a clear yes-or-no response, then add one or two specific details, such as how often you rode your bike, where you rode it, or what you used it for.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I often went cycling with my friends at the weekend.

提案: No meaningful answer is provided, so the question is not addressed. Give a direct opinion first and support it with a clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “as a result” to make your response coherent.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and commuters. They are affordable and convenient, and many people use them to avoid traffic in crowded cities.