Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但有明显的语法和表达问题。“I like”应改为过去时“I liked”，“is is”是重复错误；“good at for our health”表达不自然，应改为“good for my health”。建议使用清晰的结构：先直接回答，再说明原因。还可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的频率或骑车的地点，使答案更完整自然。

例: Yes, I did. I really enjoyed riding my bike when I was a child because it was good for my health. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: 回答的观点明确，但语法错误较多，且部分表达难以理解。“when I walking”应改为“when I walk”，“I saw”在描述通常现象时应改为“I see”，“when I at spare time”应改为“in my spare time”。“ask my transport tool”不符合英语习惯，应表达为“use my bike as a means of transportation”。建议避免重复使用“on the street”，并使用“because”和“For example”等连接词组织原因和具体例子。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see many people riding them on the streets, especially in the mornings and evenings. In my spare time, I sometimes use my bike as a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transportation.

× I like biking very much when I was a child because I think biking is is good at for our health.

✓ I liked biking very much when I was a child because I thought biking was good for my health.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，因此主要动词应使用过去时：like 改为 liked，think 改为 thought，is 改为 was。建议先判断事件发生的时间，再统一使用相应的时态。

× I like biking very much when I was a child because I think biking is is good at for our health.

✓ I liked biking very much when I was a child because I thought biking was good for my health.

表示“对健康有益”应使用固定搭配 be good for，而不能说 be good at for。good at 表示“擅长做某事”，例如：She is good at riding bikes。

× I like biking very much when I was a child because I think biking is is good at for our health.

✓ I liked biking very much when I was a child because I thought biking was good for my health.

is is 是重复使用动词，造成句子结构错误。一个完整的谓语中不能无故重复两个相同的 be 动词。修改后只保留 was。

× Yes, I think it's true because when I walking on the street I saw a lot of people biking on the street and when I at spare time I really get a bike and ask my transport tool.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I walk on the street, I see a lot of people riding bikes. When I have spare time, I often ride a bike as my means of transportation.

这句话描述的是现在经常发生的情况，所以应使用一般现在时：walking 改为 walk，saw 改为 see。建议描述习惯、事实或经常发生的事情时使用一般现在时。

× Yes, I think it's true because when I walking on the street I saw a lot of people biking on the street and when I at spare time I really get a bike and ask my transport tool.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I walk on the street, I see a lot of people riding bikes. When I have spare time, I often ride a bike as my means of transportation.

when I at spare time 缺少谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。应改为 when I have spare time。注意：英语句子通常需要主语和谓语动词。

× Yes, I think it's true because when I walking on the street I saw a lot of people biking on the street and when I at spare time I really get a bike and ask my transport tool.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I walk on the street, I see a lot of people riding bikes. When I have spare time, I often ride a bike as my means of transportation.

表示“在空闲时间”应使用固定搭配 in my spare time，而不是 when I at spare time。修改后的 when I have spare time 表示“当我有空时”，结构也更加完整。