Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答抓住了问题，并提到了自行车来自父亲，但有较多发音、词汇和语法错误，影响了表达清晰度。例如，“rock”应为“bike”，“when I first killed”应改为“when I was a child”，“take new one”应为“buy a new one”，“sent the old one for me”应为“gave the old one to me”。建议使用清晰的结构：先直接回答，再说明自行车的来源，最后补充使用情况。注意句子之间要使用标点和连接词，避免一个句子过长。

例: Yes, I did. My father gave me his old bike when I was a child because he bought a new one for work. I used to ride it around my neighborhood and really enjoyed it.

提案: 回答没有清楚表达“自行车是否受欢迎”的观点，许多词语似乎使用错误，导致意思难以理解。例如，“I am so not”不能清楚表示观点；“hotel is welcomed”可能想表达“housing is expensive”或“my hometown is well-developed”；“write it”应为“ride it”；“my father have”应为“my father has”。建议先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，然后给出一个具体原因，例如交通拥堵、价格便宜、环保或道路条件。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. They are affordable and convenient, and people can use them to avoid traffic jams. However, some people prefer cars because cycling can be difficult in bad weather.

× when I first killed from my father

✓ when I first got one from my father

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。根据语境，应该用过去式“got”，表示“从父亲那里得到一辆自行车”。“killed”表示“杀死”，不符合语境。

× He used to ride bike to go to work.

✓ He used to ride a bike to go to work.

可数名词“bike”是单数，并且这里是泛指一辆自行车，所以前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。

× he decided to take new one

✓ he decided to get a new one

“one”在这里代替单数可数名词“bike”，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。因此应说“a new one”。

× he sent the old one for me

✓ he gave the old one to me

表示“把某物给某人”时，应使用结构“give something to somebody”，所以这里应使用介词“to”，而不是“for”。

× I am so not because my hotel is welcomed

✓ I am not sure because bikes are not very popular

“I am so not”不能自然地表达“不确定”。表达“不确定”应使用形容词“sure”，即“I am not sure”。此外，回答的是自行车是否流行，因此应直接说“bikes are not very popular”。

× my father have to pay a lot of money

✓ my father has to pay a lot of money

主语“my father”是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时中动词“have”要变为“has”。固定结构是“has to + 动词原形”。

× buy one and write it to go to work

✓ buy one and ride it to go to work

根据语境，表达“骑自行车去上班”应使用动词“ride”。“write”表示“写”，不能用于表示骑自行车。