Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但“another toys”搭配错误，应改为“other toys”或“another toy”。另外，前后表达有些重复，可以用过去时简洁说明你小时候玩什么，例如说明具体玩具，并使用“instead”连接对比。

例: No, I didn't. I had other toys to play with instead, such as building blocks and toy cars.

提案: 回答有观点，也提到了健身和通勤两个原因，但有较多词汇和语法错误，影响清晰度。“youngers”应改为“young people”，“a can of sports”应改为“a kind of sport”，“do it”应改为“ride bikes”，“companies”在这里应改为“workplaces”，“bags”应改为“bikes”。建议先给出总体判断，再分别说明年轻人骑车锻炼和人们骑车上班，并使用“because”或“also”连接细节。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many young people ride them at weekends to stay fit. Also, people who live close to their workplaces often cycle to work because it is cheap and convenient.

× No, I didn't but I had another toys to play with when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't, but I had another toy to play with when I was a child.

“another”表示“另一个”，后面通常接可数名词单数，因此应使用“toy”，不能使用复数形式“toys”。另外，在“but”前加逗号可以使句子结构更清晰。

× Yes, I think bikes for youngers is like a can of sports. They always do it on holidays to keep fit and for other people, if their home is not far away from their companies, they always choose bags as transportation.

✓ Yes, I think bikes for young people are like a kind of sport. They always do it on holidays to keep fit, and for other people, if their homes are not far away from their companies, they always choose bags as transportation.

“youngers”不是正确的复数名词表达，应改为“young people”。“other people”是复数，所以其对应的名词应使用复数形式“homes”，而不是“home”。这里仅修改了单复数相关错误；“bags”等词语可能存在词义或用词问题，但不属于题目所列的语法错误类型。

× Yes, I think bikes for youngers is like a can of sports. They always do it on holidays to keep fit and for other people, if their home is not far away from their companies, they always choose bags as transportation.

✓ Yes, I think bikes for young people are like a kind of sport. They always do it on holidays to keep fit, and for other people, if their homes are not far away from their companies, they always choose bags as transportation.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。修改后的句子保持了一般现在时，因为这里描述的是通常的观点和习惯。