Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，但时态和搭配有错误。“when I was a child”表示过去经历，因此应使用一般过去时；“haven't have”应改为“didn't have”或“I never had”。另外，可以补充一个具体原因或相关细节，使答案更完整，例如说明你为什么没有自行车，或小时候通常如何出行。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to walk or take the bus. I sometimes borrowed my friends’ bikes to ride around the neighborhood.

提案: 答案的主要观点不清楚，“Not not popular”应明确改为“they aren’t very popular”或“they are quite popular”。“the mountain there”表达不自然，应使用“there are many mountains in my city”或“my city is very mountainous”。建议先直接回答问题，再用“because”解释原因，并补充一个具体结果，例如山路陡峭导致人们更常选择汽车或公共交通。

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my city. The city is quite mountainous, so cycling can be tiring, especially on steep roads. As a result, most people prefer to drive or use public transportation.

× No, I haven't have any bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此应该使用一般过去时“didn’t have”，而不能使用现在完成时“haven’t have”。另外，“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。

× No, I haven't have any bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

“bike”是单数可数名词。这里表示“没有一辆自行车”，所以应该说“a bike”，不能说“any bike”。在肯定意义的单数可数名词前，通常需要使用“a/an”或“the”等限定词。

× Not not popular, uh, because the mountain there, there are so many mountains in my city.

✓ They’re not very popular because there are so many mountains in my city.

原句中的“because the mountain there”不是完整、正确的句子结构，而且“Not not”重复。回答“Are bikes popular?”时，可以使用主语“They”指代“bikes”，并说“They’re not very popular because...”来构成完整句子。

× Not not popular, uh, because the mountain there, there are so many mountains in my city.

✓ They’re not very popular because there are so many mountains in my city.

“the mountain there”部分缺少谓语动词，不能独立构成正确的从句。可以改为“because there are so many mountains in my city”，其中“There are”表示“有”。