Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly in the past tense: say whether you had a bike as a child. Avoid correcting yourself repeatedly, fillers such as “MMM,” and unfinished sentences. Use accurate grammar, especially “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child” and “I rarely ride it now.” Add one specific reason, and use a linking word such as “although” or “because” to connect your ideas.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I have one now, although I rarely ride it because the roads in my country are quite dangerous for cyclists.

提案: Give a clear opinion at the beginning, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular” or “No, they aren’t very popular.” Avoid fillers, repetition, and unclear phrases like “must come and use the vehicles.” Use the correct structure “riding a bike is difficult” and support your opinion with a specific explanation, such as traffic, road conditions, or the number of people who cycle. Keep the answer to two or three well-connected sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. However, many people do not cycle regularly because the roads are crowded and there are very few dedicated bike lanes.

× Well actually I don't have an didn't have any bike when I was child, but I now I have MMM bike now.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the past tense didn't have is required. The phrase don't have refers to the present and is inconsistent with the time expression when I was a child.

× Well actually I don't have an didn't have any bike when I was child, but I now I have MMM bike now.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have a bike.

Singular countable nouns such as bike require an article. Use a bike when referring to one bike generally. Also, say a child rather than child.

× Well actually I don't have an didn't have any bike when I was child, but I now I have MMM bike now.

✓ Well, actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have a bike.

The phrase an didn't have contains two conflicting forms, and I now I have incorrectly repeats the subject. The corrected sentence has one clear subject and one correctly formed verb phrase in each clause.

× However, I barely rear bike ride my bike because in my country bike is really.

✓ However, I rarely ride my bike because cycling is very difficult in my country.

The phrase rear bike ride is not a valid English verb phrase, and the sentence ends with the incomplete phrase bike is really. The correction uses the natural expression rarely ride my bike and adds the necessary adjective complement, difficult.

× Actually, in my country, the bikes are must come and use the uh, uh, vehicles, but it's uh, I don't really, uh, ride the bike because in my country ride the bike is riding a bike is very difficult and dangerous.

✓ Actually, in my country, bikes are commonly used vehicles, but I do not really ride a bike because riding a bike is very difficult and dangerous in my country.

The definite article the is not normally used before a plural noun when speaking about bikes in general. Also, ride the bike is changed to ride a bike because the speaker is referring to cycling generally, not to one specific bike.

× Actually, in my country, the bikes are must come and use the uh, uh, vehicles, but it's uh, I don't really, uh, ride the bike because in my country ride the bike is riding a bike is very difficult and dangerous.

✓ Actually, in my country, bikes are commonly used vehicles, but I do not really ride a bike because riding a bike is very difficult and dangerous in my country.

When a verb phrase functions as the subject of a sentence, use the gerund form. Therefore, riding a bike is correct, not ride the bike. The -ing form represents the activity of cycling.

× Actually, in my country, the bikes are must come and use the uh, uh, vehicles, but it's uh, I don't really, uh, ride the bike because in my country ride the bike is riding a bike is very difficult and dangerous.

✓ Actually, in my country, bikes are commonly used vehicles, but I do not really ride a bike because riding a bike is very difficult and dangerous in my country.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected phrases, including are must come and use and ride the bike is riding a bike. The correction uses complete clauses with a clear subject, verb, and complement.