Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief to demonstrate your speaking ability. Add one or two specific details, such as when you received the bike, how often you used it, or what you enjoyed doing with it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed cycling because it gave me a sense of freedom.

提案: You provide a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but the answer contains repetition and several grammatical problems. Replace “I am coming from Sri Lanka” with “I come from Sri Lanka” or “I am from Sri Lanka,” and say “Sri Lanka is a lower-middle-income country” instead of “the income level of people is lower middle income.” Avoid repeating “So” and correct the sentence “many people it's a popular mode of transport” to “many people use them as a popular mode of transport.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Sri Lanka. Since Sri Lanka is a lower-middle-income country, bicycles are an affordable and practical means of transportation, especially for short journeys. As a result, many people use them to travel to work, school, or local markets.

× I am coming from Sri Lanka where the income level of people is lower middle income.

✓ I come from Sri Lanka, where the average income is in the lower-middle-income range.

The present continuous form 'am coming' usually describes an action happening around the time of speaking. To state your country of origin or a permanent fact, use the simple present 'come'. The phrase 'in the lower-middle-income range' is also the natural way to describe an income level.

× So many people it's a popular mode of transport and many people use it.

✓ Therefore, bikes are a popular mode of transport, and many people use them.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'many people' with 'it's' without a complete grammatical structure. 'Therefore' clearly shows the result, and 'bikes' requires the plural pronoun 'them', not 'it'.